Post by DP on May 16, 2007 23:06:17 GMT -5
Ok I ran it through my teacher and here is the fully revised block turned into poem.... ;D
The life we had, the life we knew. What happened?
Did we just end up in this place just for the pleasure of some freak to examine our
Emotions, our actions, life?
What is all the meaning of this? So many thins I don't understand yet so many things I
Yearn to understand but can't.
Is existence a lie, or is it just me living through the motions of a never ending paradox of
confusion and broken souls?
It is these questions that have kept me alive for so long,
yet the soul and body can only take so much hurt before it just quits.
Will you be the one to lay down arms and give up body and mind for the pleasure of a
greater being, controlling you like the puppet of a marionette show?
That is only for you to decide, let yourself open the key to never ending life and maby earn the chance of life in the future, or of survival, for these questions I cannot answer, I
hope they will drive me to find the answer, for only then may I let down my arms and lie
and rest my tired eyes.
there know complete my first ever looked at piece of poetry..... ;Dand it wouldn't be alive if I haden't of gotten that knack for rping on that day....
The life we had, the life we knew. What happened?
Did we just end up in this place just for the pleasure of some freak to examine our
Emotions, our actions, life?
What is all the meaning of this? So many thins I don't understand yet so many things I
Yearn to understand but can't.
Is existence a lie, or is it just me living through the motions of a never ending paradox of
confusion and broken souls?
It is these questions that have kept me alive for so long,
yet the soul and body can only take so much hurt before it just quits.
Will you be the one to lay down arms and give up body and mind for the pleasure of a
greater being, controlling you like the puppet of a marionette show?
That is only for you to decide, let yourself open the key to never ending life and maby earn the chance of life in the future, or of survival, for these questions I cannot answer, I
hope they will drive me to find the answer, for only then may I let down my arms and lie
and rest my tired eyes.
there know complete my first ever looked at piece of poetry..... ;Dand it wouldn't be alive if I haden't of gotten that knack for rping on that day....
